Hearts Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Hearts

Rating: 5.0


On a cold and windy day. Oh, how I love to watch the trees sway.
With not a single soul around, love to listen to the sound...As
the wind whisps the leaves across the ground...I began to slowly drift away, when I heard something make me stop and stay.
Off in a distance but not to far..a chord, a string and a few
bars. Starting off gentle, soft and slow. Then stronger and louder
it began to grow. Note by note, key by key. Steadfast and constant it came to me. It caught me hard and struck so deep. I grabbed out
for something, but there was nothing to reach..My mind went blank,
simply astray, something forgotten from yesterday. Coming back to
me like a ghost from the past, a song, I hoped always would last.
It danced and played acrossed my mind...When all in a dream it synced in time. As the music put your hand back over mine. What
once was lost, now once again does pound..As two heart beats now
are found!

Sunday, September 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,music,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 04 March 2022

Starting off gentle, soft and slow. Then stronger and louder it began to grow. Note by note, key by key.....beautiful expression. Loved this wonderful poem.5 stars.

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Jeanette Telusma 26 October 2017

- - Steadfast and constant it came to me. It caught me hard and struck so deep.- - Between these lines lies the connection of love, music and life. Lovely poem in it's entirety.

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Rebecca Navarre 29 October 2017

Thank You! ! ! Jeanette, For Such A Beautifully Kind And Thoughtful Reply! ! ! ! ! Your Poems Are Oh, So Beautiful To Read! ! ! ! ! Touching Life, Nature, And God, With The Words You Sow And Speak! ! ! ! ! :) Thank You Again Ever So Much! ! ! ! ! Ever So Many Blessings! ! ! ! ! And Smiles! ! ! ! !

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Sandra Feldman 29 September 2016

The feelings in this poem find, The way to reach The reader's heart and mind, Pleasantly, present you find a way To make them well and vividly stay. Great poem, we participate and flow with it. Very nicely done.

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Rebecca Navarre 05 November 2016

Thank You! So Much Sandra, So Dearly Love Your Writings! Sorry so late to respond missed a few.. Many, Many, Blessings! ! !

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