Heart Ache, Go Away Poem by Rebecca Harvey

Heart Ache, Go Away

Rating: 3.5


Hear it beat does it ever stop?
Ever does it seem its not there?
Away over the rainbow, above or
Racing throgh life as we know it
Tracing his heart in your mind

Aching and breaking away each day
Cherishing each moment together
Having memories to visit all the time
Every day as you see it pass by

Give up i say to myself
Over and away i flee

Aching stops but your heat does not
Wanting every thing in one go
As years pass, it dissappers
Years by years does it get better?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stephen Peter Mills 17 February 2009

it does get better.... that's the fun part of love, finding it and holding on to it as long as you can.. great write Rebecca steve

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Sathyanarayana M V S 10 October 2009

Fascinating imagery! A tone in tune with the thought.

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Eyan Desir 07 October 2009

Well time heals love wounds Well most of them good write

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Tobias Caldicott 29 June 2009

not a bad little poem, May I suggest you read some works by W.H Auden.

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Aching and breaking away each day Cherishing each moment together Having memories to visit all the time Every day as you see it pass by... i love to be along... very good write dear... u deserve....10 read mine u go all alone and how are u?

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James Mclain 23 June 2009

No dear it doesn't..it gets heavier and fuller waiting just for a touch..only when u have no one to touch are u free of it..but few woman are free of it so when you do touch it..you are consumed all over again in it..to be filled by it..sorry...iip

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