Heart-Ache Poem by prathamesh ingale

Heart-Ache

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When i see you with him,
my heart starts to cry,
tear fall takes place inside,
but, eyes are dry.

when i see you my mind dances,
and heart starts to sing,
for me you are my queen,
And I am your king.

I am silent in front of you,
you would be thinking I am dumb,
And if you also love me,
for me it will be rum.


by-prathamesh ingale

Sunday, July 24, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 25 July 2016

Beautiful depiction of the mighty spiritual experience that is love - a voyage of pure bliss when it is mutual, but a cause of serious heartache when it's not reciprocated. Lovely poem well brought forth from inner recesses of the heart in good rhyme scheme with conviction. Thanks for sharing Prathamesh. Please read my poem THE OBSESSIVE AGONY OF LUST.

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Kelly Kurt 24 July 2016

An emotional poem, Prathamesh. Thank you

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 July 2016

But, eyes are dry! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Gajanan Mishra 24 July 2016

heart starts to sing, good one

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