Heard Your Voice Today Poem by Louise Tredoux

Heard Your Voice Today



I heard your voice today, in the wind that blew
the sand dunes away, in the rustle of trees; I felt
so comforted by the sound of raindrops on the
iron roof, a promise of showers to come, a sure
sign that you were thinking of me; as the rains
increased I was convinced you had sent them
for me especially, knowing how barren and bleak
life seemed without you to inspire my heart

I faced the ordeal of no letter from you so bravely,
knowing your love to be present in the elements;
listening to the wind outside, all are complaining
the wind is blowing the rain clouds away, but I’m
sure it was a sign from YOU to assure me that
you are aware that I am still there, far from
you, tucked away on a farm, alone; scared
of wide-open spaces, longing for the sea

Pining away, but now that you said you are
thinking of me by sending the rain and the
wind; I’m satisfied - time is passing and
soon we shall be together again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 03 July 2008

Longing is this how longing it could be...sincere write...good emotions...gives good feel

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Shagun Khera 20 June 2008

Louise......this is amazing stuff....simply awesome....speechless.

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