louis rams

Freshman - 723 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

Healers Judgement Day - Poem by louis rams

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The flames surrounded him in orange and red
That’s when he realized that he was dead.
They had sent him the other way, for his crimes he had to pay.
He had abused children, men and women
During the time that he was living.
He had no feelings, no emotions of any kind
For the almighty dollar made him blind.
He would do anything to amass his fortune
Even charging for illegal abortions.
He robbed Medicare for all that he could get
And hadn’t been caught yet.
He was described as a healer, but sold prescription drugs
To addicts and dealers.
In him the public had put their trust and faith
But it was a little too late.
He had already lost his soul, as the devil took control.
He finally reached his bitter end, when he turned
His back on family and friends.
Now he finds himself in the flames of hell
Where for eternity he will dwell.
He screamed and cried to the fathers son
Asking for forgiveness for all that he had done.
Why is it that we wait until it is too late?
As we stand at the judgment gate.
© L. RAMS


Comments about Healers Judgement Day by louis rams

  • Freshman - 723 Points Louis Rams (2/4/2014 5:35:00 AM)

    he may be forgiven in gods infinite mercy but highly unlikely - we all must pay for our crimes against one another (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,472 Points Lyn Paul (2/3/2014 9:10:00 PM)

    Great write Louis. Though Impossible to forgive someone who has caused so much pain to others. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 3, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 4, 2014


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