He Who Is Watched By The Unseen God Poem by Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

He Who Is Watched By The Unseen God

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He who walks knows not he is watched:
By a God who sees us all and is fair,
Though not seen by human eyes,
No one doubts that he is there...

He who is watched by the unseen God -
By Him is not protected:
From the obvios trials of life,
And so by Evil he is more effected...

He who has tried to please his God...
Will see heaven when he dies,
Though to be holy in life often he failed:
He repented: and most importantly he tried.

Thise mortals who holy themselves saw...
And this sinner who was by them condemned...
May find themselves in a different place:
Then they expected by Judgements end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joe Breunig 01 June 2006

A wonder write; the last stanza was more than a fitting ending; great job!

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Bridgid Patrick 19 February 2006

Judge not lest ye be Judged first......Another brilliant piece....x

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Jeremiah Shine 30 January 2006

i like it...It seems today that there are many who seem to know God's plan, and how to go about fulfilling it. Judgement is a painful thing, when a person realises that judgement was their crime.

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Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Tomás Ó Cárthaigh

Beal Atha na Slua, Chontae an Gaillimh, Eire
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