He Who Dares. Poem by Fay Slimm

He Who Dares.

Rating: 5.0


Hushed and hydrated,
Water-wet otters,
Timorous creatures,
Dissension dislike.

Hostile approaches,
Raising reactions.
Daring offensives
Unnerving the pike.

Opposing behaviour
Self-will underpins.
Courage in warfare
Means he who dares
....................... wins!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 02 November 2009

he who dares wins...like no pain no glory is it! ! ! Loved your poem........

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Ian Bowen 02 November 2009

Fay, really like the way you composed this. Excellent piece of poetry.10/10 Regards, Ian

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 07 November 2009

Your a fine writer Fay, smiles timid heart they say.. :) Andy 10

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Eyan Desir 04 November 2009

Intersting and fine poem..10

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David Harris 02 November 2009

Fay, I liked this, especially the last stanza. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us my friend. Hugs David

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Tsira Goge 02 November 2009

Opposing behaviour Self-will underpins. Courage in warfare Means he who dares ....................... wins! Strong words, it is remarkable. 10............. Thank you Fay... Tsira

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Daniel Kempson 02 November 2009

Top notch poem Fay, love otters such cheeky chappies 10 Daniel

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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