' He's In My Dream ' Poem by Riquetta Elliott
' He's In My Dream '
I am covered in heavy cloth
In peace.
I closed my eyes and
Visioned a friend as in
My lover.
As I dream in the mind, I dream that
He is with me.
As we were in covers, our bodies
Attach.
As I touch him, he touch me.
When I kiss him, he kiss me.
Something amazed that him and I
Was going to make and yes we
Undressed naked.
We were about to begin with the sexual experience,
But the eyes of mine was open.
He was gone.
Then I have a wish of saying I
Wish the presence of my lover who
Called himself a 'Black Fabio' will come
Back into my dreams again.
Fullest possible expression very original. I see soupcon of T.S Elliot in all the spice that this poem is imbued with Shabash [ Urdu for Atta Boy]
Commendable work, here, Shia. Creative concept/expression of passion & romance. Mellifluous stanzaec movement, allows for a smooth-fluxed read.Keep that pen of yours pumpin', young lady. ~ FjcR ~
This poem has such a solid, physical presence as I read it, it stimulates the nerve endings.
Very inventive and equally well worded - - a good write and a ten from me -- Fay..
Beautiful poetic story, you have narrated well...Thanks for the share...10+++
That's a beautiful poem! A nice story, just check your grammar. I love it, don't give up; keep on writing. Great inspiration!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Wonderous stuff Riquetta... I love... 'Something amazed that him and I Was going to make and yes we was Dressed naked.' Truly awesome! Rogerx.