He Promised Poem by Tyler Tillett

He Promised

Rating: 4.5


He promised me his world.
He promised that I was everything.
He promised his love
He promised his life.
He promised.
He promised that I was the one, that he loved me.
He promised, and he threw it away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Twysted Xprezzions 24 May 2008

I agree with Blacknessrose..... i like it.... sums up a whole lot of feelings and emotions into a form that can be appreciated and understood by all who read it

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BlacknessRose ... 02 April 2008

I like it, It's short, sweet, and to the point. It shows what most guys do. Lovez, Katya

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MCKENZi : ] 11 March 2008

yeah, guys tend to do that - lie. ugh.: [

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Make A Wish 09 March 2008

that is truley deep... i love it. people always promise you everything, but always break those promises

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Rae Rae 07 March 2008

thats real deep and thats why promise aren't much to me

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