He Lived Poem by John F. McCullagh

He Lived

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He Lived
So long she was disconsolate,
her only son was gone.
Years had passed and still she mourned,
while everyone else moved on.
Pictures in an album
brought pain as she recalled,
still, gradually she took solace
from the fact he'd lived at all.
We all bear psychic scars
from those we've loved, then lost.
It's the burden of existence
and we all must pay the cost.
She hopes, upon an astral plan,
to meet him face to face.
A place where sorrow turns to joy
and all tears are erased.

Tuesday, May 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sorrow
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My friend has worked through sorrow to a king of acceptance concerning the loss of her much loved son.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very nice poem. Would like to make some suggestions (it's up to the writer) . Line 10 could be changed to read: the psychic scars we all bear and line 12: The burden of existence, all must pay the cost. Enjoyed it.

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