Hawthorn Dene Poem by Paul Reed

Hawthorn Dene

Rating: 5.0


The April afternoon
Dared us to enter this secret place
Closing the lids of sad eyes
To capture memories in our floodlit minds;

Where a quiet symphony praising spring
Whispered soft caresses as it took us in it's arms,

Where the wild garlic,
Arranged like a green-woven tapestry
Of perfect rows from nature's loom
Clothed the slopes from naked display;

This world of brooks and streams
That held the sunlight's sparkle
Gurgling and dancing down steep ravines,
Where cares ceased to be.

Hawthorn Dene
Monday, April 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom Billsborough 25 April 2016

Your description of that secret dell reminds me of a place near where my mother was born in the valley of the River Brock in Northern EnglandThere was a profusion of wild garlic and bluebells in the woods surrounding, the small river. Your description is very evocative and refreshing, a true breath of Spring. It's worth a ten without doubt. Tom Billsborough

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