Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Have A Long Life - Poem by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

Daily activities
Take toll on you
Have some time off
And relax yourself
Like a race car
That takes a ride
On its special trailer
To save some of its life.

When it rains
Cover yourself with
Waterproof clothes
Not to get wet
And don't you walk
On painted lines
They look like guides
But maybe slippery.

Simple observations
Save you some days
Add more to these
To make life long.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Comments about Have A Long Life by Tirupathi Chandrupatla

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (6/18/2013 5:10:00 PM)

    life gets so demanidng sometimes it is good to sit back and relax. nice (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,446 Points Somanathan Iyer (6/16/2013 3:33:00 AM)

    Nice advice with real concern. Thanks sir, (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 45,404 Points Valsa George (6/15/2013 11:23:00 PM)

    Take a break and relax! Look around and watch Nature and life! That will enhance quality life! ! A sound advice! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,727 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (6/13/2013 11:20:00 AM)

    Good advice, but people would normally do what they like..Thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 12, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 6, 2014

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