Haunted Dream Poem by David Blake

Haunted Dream

Rating: 5.0


What would you say to the
haunted wind that blows from
some distant unseen plain? The
forest of splintered dreams filled
with all the lives and lies I have
know now again set afire with
desire. Drifting far and then
coming near I see what it is to
be free but turn away and follow
after you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Al Ramos 21 February 2008

Good stuff, would like to see your thoughts drawn out a little more to show off your skill

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