Hatred Poem by Koby Moore
Hatred
Hatred, It has a reason, but shall never be said
Hatred, It makes you want certain people dead
Hatred, You think of it in your bed
Hatred, It gets bigger and bigger as it's fed
Hatred, It fills every area inside your head
Hatred, It brings you down like a weight of lead
Hatred, It fills your mind with a lot of dread
Hatred, There are reasons as I've read
But the reason for hatred shall never be said...
I like that keep up with the writing. You described hatred so well in this poem to be so young and to write on such an important topic
I see your overall idea on how hatred affects you, i like the concept. Try less repetition on the next one, but good job!
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You seem to have some unnecessary lines that you wrote just to make the poem longer and it kind is redundant by the end. Maybe you could get more figurative and paint hatred in an unusual way. Check out my poems please! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 2:17:31 AM # 1.0.0.1119
nice poem, describes aptly how hatred feels and what it does to you