Has Been Long Since... Poem by Dhanesh (trying to be) poet

Has Been Long Since...

Rating: 5.0


Has been long since I had a fight,
Has been long since I did a write,

Has been long since I was offended to compete,
Has been long since I saw victory or defeat,

Has been long since anyone saw me furious,
Has been long since someone made me curious,

Has been long since I hugged my friend tight,
Has been long since I was awake whole night,

Has been long since we shared lot of joy,
Has been long since we played together with a toy,

Has been long since I ran & ran far away,
Has been long since I forgot my way,

Has been long since I played in sun at 4pm,
Has been long since I planted a green stem,

Has been long since I wrote jus to do so,
Has been long since I said 'I know',

Has been long since I am writing this poem on my pad,
However, its giving me feeling of being bit glad,

Not sure will dear readers call me sane or out of my mind,
I have arranged my poem in a manner of having silk-lined.

(I wrote it... just wrote it... didnt gave much thougths to it)

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Dhanesh Aradhye
(09 Jan 2009)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 09 January 2009

has been long...yes; so long...so you wrote this down...now you would be able to say it hasn't been that long i wrote about all those things i did back long! a nice write frank original crazy and crispy...10

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Anjali Sinha 09 January 2009

has been long since we spoke to each other has been long since -- wow nice thoughts which must have just spilt out -- +++++++10 anjali

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Ted M 04 July 2009

You have a natural and simplicity in your writing which makes it very nice to read.

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Hemant Paralkar 29 May 2009

Duniya jise kahte hai jadoo ka ek khilona hai, mile toh mitthi na mile toh sona(gold) hai............... Carry on dear............ i liked this one.................

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Amit Gokhale 20 January 2009

pratyek jan apalya anubhvatun, jagala kahitari shikavun jata, ani tey anubhavi bol shikatana, balpan kuthlya kuth harvun jata, Nice to read it for it has awaken all those sweet and cherishing memories of my childhood too.............

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Yaseen Anwer 15 January 2009

Dude U must feel proud of this piece of work being a poet!

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Neha Aradhye 11 January 2009

the reader will definitely appreciate u, dude... u just sit at some place & there u go-ur done wit a new poem of an excursive taste... well done...Keep it up...

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