Harmony I (Who Cares?) Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

Harmony I (Who Cares?)

Rating: 4.8


Who cares about their color?
They'd twinkle anyway .
Someday they'll both have places
In Heaven's bright array.

Who cares about her poundage?
She still looks very nice.
My arms still reach around her,
I think that will suffice.

Who cares about her cleavage,
Whatever size they are?
I'm sure they have their beauty.
I never got that far.

Who cares about her hairdoo?
She's going with the flow.
I doubt if she considers;
But that's not bad, you know.

Who cares how old she's getting?
She's still the same to me.
Sometimes I take for granted,
We both shall always be.

But care, I do, about her.
In life, above all things.
And cherish every moment
We share, from which it springs.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ernestine Northover 05 April 2008

That's lovely, a pleasure to read this one. Superbly constructed. Excellence written all over it. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Andrew Blakemore 20 April 2008

A wonderfully constructed work. Well done. Andrew

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Just Jes 29 April 2008

very thick with rhetoric, but the manner in which it is used works well. One can't always say that about question in verse. Can see why it was so popular. Thanks for sharing

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Jamaya Ewing 09 May 2008

YO DIS iz hot u should continue u feel me

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S... Che 12 June 2008

awww thats a very sweet poem. lucky girl

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Cristy Upshaw 29 May 2009

what a wonderful way to look at another. true beauty is on the inside and if such beauty beholds it will shine all the way through. awesome piece.

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Mamta Agarwal 01 April 2009

who cares- some do...wise know better lovely poem, beautiful last stanza Mamta

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Frieda Lumpkins 20 February 2009

This has to be the sweetest poem I have read, not many men are able to put their feelings out like this

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Tanya Stanford 13 August 2008

I wish all men could see the beauty within as you clearly do... Lovely rhymes to.

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Corey Threet 12 August 2008

I love the way u rhyme it's actually something I'm working on and rhythm so I envy all that can write as beautifully as you. Make sure everyone knows about this one too so. Spread yourself! ! ! ! !

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