Hare Rama Poem by Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Douglas Scotney

Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide

Hare Rama



I'm interested in your exploration
of garlic's contribution to sensation,
how it's connected to sexual fire;
how come without it I still have desire.

So garlic's not the only thing.

So could I temper another thing,
and do garlic in moderation,
and maintain fire as it is,

or find what that other thing is,
cut it too, and curb the fire?

Thursday, December 18, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: desire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C N Prem Kumar 19 December 2014

The rhyme scheme is excellemt

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Pranab K Chakraborty 19 December 2014

Poet has garlicated the anatomic metabolism with its non-chanting credibility. So other thing could be the caustic to clear the stain of dirt from human conscious. Second part of Hare Rama obviously Hare Krishna, here the other hottest elements are present. Just wait to touch it.

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Douglas Scotney

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Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide
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