Harbored Poem by JoJo Bean, Dodgy Dave and Meggie Gultiano

Harbored

Rating: 3.8


Harbored


As I look from my window
Across the morning stilled harbor
Little boats lie stranded
On a shore without a sea

The morning mist
Like some great sleek ghost
With fingers spreading out touching
and caressing the empty tidewaters there
Perhaps looking for lost treasures

A lone tern
with narrow slender wings
circles the brumous October morn
In pursuit of the riches

Looking for that silvery shining gold
To light and ease up this burning feeling
The wind beneath my wings
The love that keeps pouring, it overflows


5 Jan 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

This is ethereal.... leaves the reader wanting more. And an excellent plan for you three to get together. More! (in Oliver Twist fashion.....) t x

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Duncan Wyllie 10 January 2008

Some lovely discription Guys, well worth the read...Thankyou Love duncan X

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Melvina Germain 10 January 2008

Poets coming together and writing in sync, I think that's really special. Keep it up, I look forward to more. Melvina

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Sandra Fowler 09 January 2008

Excellent imagery.Three souls in tune indeed.Encore! Warmest regards, Sandra

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Alison Cassidy 08 January 2008

A beautiful poetic trio with every instrument perfectly pitched and in harmony. Images of the sea and light and love intertwine like voices singing in chorus. Congratulations you three. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Francesca Johnson 08 January 2008

Thank you Dodgy Dave for telling me about this 'trioetry' as I call it. A wonderful poem, full of visions in the mind's eye, pictures so real I can see them. And what's more important, it shows how three people from different parts of the world can get together and work in harmony. Well done JoJo, Meggie and Dave. Like Tara says, can we have more? Love, Fran xxx

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