Happy & Lonely Poem by sanitra porter

Happy & Lonely



when you held me at nite i became happy. when you kissed me on my lips i became glad.
when you step out the door i became lonely. when you left and didnt return i became sad.
when you hit me in my face i became shocked cause you never did anything like it.
when you left me for one of your h*** i became mad and fierce. now that your gone im lonely all over again

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 06 October 2011

Song of despair... Well written... Those who are lonley because of love really feel the pain of love... Good one!

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Unwritten Soul 09 October 2011

Honest ink, you have sweet heart to proud but to be sad is not allowed...haha i wish you keep on doing, inking paper with these words..this is nice poem so, write the next poems okay? _Unwritten Soul

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Claudia Krizay 03 February 2012

sad but very powerful and honest- good one!

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hdhd dudjf 11 November 2011

very nice poem.. but you know, you should be happy you are no longer with such a person...you deserve much better :)

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Wendee Isaacs 27 October 2011

nice poem....really touched my heart

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Claudia Krizay 27 October 2011

A poem filled with truth and emotion- beautifully done!

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Crimson Love 13 October 2011

were all alone when it comes to love, perhaps its ones fate, but perhaps its for the best, beautiful poem.

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