Happy I Go Unhappy I Go Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Happy I Go Unhappy I Go

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I don't know my friends where I go,
Leaving pieces of my heart somewhere I go,
Happy I go, Unhappy I go,
I wish handsome and pretty I go,
I go anyway to the Milky Way,
I don't know where it carries the clay,
Unhappy with myself and happy with you,
Thanks for the time that was pretty with you,
You can excise my luggage, I have stolen something,
Nothing else I stole just only one thing,
It's drug of your love I stole my friends,
That's all my luggage as a whole my friends,
My dear friends, yes I am an addict
I need your heart can't live without it,
And the theft of your heart, may I explain?
But please allow me to keep and sustain,
I needed a heart, as I was heartless,
While stealing your heart I was merciless,
With your heart I shall live and I shall fly,
To a fairy's land in the blue sky!

Into hundreds of pieces I cut my heart,
I found the blood of hate sweetheart,
Washed the pieces with tears so hot,
Removed the stains in a truly big pot,
Colorless, odorless, I made it clean,
Bold and fearless when I found the lean,
All over the world, dispatched to my friends,
After a fatigue of bends and mends,
Those accepted it in a too far land,
Put it on the palm of the lovely left hand,
Smiled and touched with their loving right palms,
I can feel the touch of the friendly arms,
They were amazed to see, it turned colorful,
The piece so ugly was now beautiful,
It was color of friendship a rainbow refracted,
And a fragrance they felt, it was love reflected.
As a newly come out of an egg it was kissed,
I can't describe how much I was blissed.
But I was now heartless and I needed a heart,
How a heart is stolen I know the art.

But I confess my friends I am a criminal dove,
I am a drug smuggler, the drug of your love,
I have hidden it at place you cannot see,
Please don't excise, I shall carry it with me,
To the fairy's land, I hope and expect,
A humble request with a due respect,
To the fairy's land, I hope and wish,
A silver mermaid or a golden fish,
A handsome return, I shall get for it,
Please let me carry it for a great benefit!

Saturday, December 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 27 December 2014

An amazing poem in a lovely style..................10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 December 2014

I do not know where do I go happily or unhappily. This describes a shadows about life in wonderful manner. Beautifully crafted really.

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Ramesh Rai 28 December 2014

Beautiful. Nicely penned with your soulful ink. since you don't know where you have to go you are certainly a happiest person of this world.

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Savita Tyagi 28 December 2014

Beautiful poem Akhtarji. You are a master of rhythm and rhyme. As it happens you have given much more then what you have taken.Thank you so much.

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Soumita Sarkar 01 January 2015

liked these lines.....thanks for sharing....

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Salini Nair 30 December 2014

Washed the pieces with tears so hot, Removed the stains in a truly big pot, Colorless, odorless, I made it clean, Bold and fearless when I found the lean, poem written in a wonderful spirit...great work...like it

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Valsa George 29 December 2014

Life is one of give and take! You give love and you are getting it back! Your concern and loving involvement keeps poem hunter lively! A big THANK YOU!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 29 December 2014

This is more than extraordinary so beautifully composed with intense emotions and feelings.......Akhtarji........ I am speechless......you are so much talented.....I salute you.......10

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Creative and compelling my friend!

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