Happy Birthday! Poem by Philo Yan

Happy Birthday!



If today is your special day,
I wish you a Happy Birthday,

This Fruit and Chocolate Cake
Though can't be eaten coz it is fake
I hope you would receive and take
A real delicious fruit and chocolate cake.

Modified version:

Today is your Special Day,
I wish you a Very Happy Birthday!
The Fruit and Chocolate Cake,
Though can't be eaten because it's fake.
I hope you would receive and take,
A real delicious fruit and chocolate cake!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was accompanied with a color pencil drawing I did depicting a square chocolate cake shaped like a basket. On top are filled with red juicy strawberries, green leaves, yellow, purple and blue flowers at the corners on a silver platter

You may view my drawing at:
//picasaweb.google.com/115604348708138178965/MyArtCorner2012#5776790047559865234

Thank you for looking and Have An AweSome Day!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Philo Yan 15 August 2012

Thanks Leslie for your comment.

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Leslie Philibert 15 August 2012

Funny, wry poem, that needs the poet`s notes as background

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