Amitava Sur

Gold Star - 13,216 Points (20.01.1950 / Kolkata)

Happy Birth Day - Poem by Amitava Sur

Happy birthday to you dear
A very happy birthday to you.

The candle lights with chocolate cake –
Your lovely birth day with rose petals,
The number of candles today you blew,
Are the number of years that you flew.
All the dreams you did pursue -
May all of them come true.
Happy birthday to you dear
A very happy birthday to you.

Sweet memories are here to stay -
With smiles hugs and all gifts on display,
Wish you all the happiness and peace -
Be bestowed upon in the coming days.
As you wish upon a star -
May zillions of stars gaze over.
Happy birthday to you dear
A very happy birthday to you.

Soft music playing with lights –
Makes a vibrant evening tonight.
Had I been with you today
Singing dancing and wish to say -
Happy birthday to you dear
A very happy birthday to you.
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Amitava


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Amitava (3.11.2013)

Comments about Happy Birth Day by Amitava Sur

  • Gold Star - 41,590 Points Roseann Shawiak (4/11/2015 2:17:00 AM)

    Wish all my birthdays would have this same wish, Amitava! A beautiful melody of love you have written here in this poem. I agree with Patricia, it would make a beautiful birthday song if sung by you! You have a wonderful resonating voice, Amitava! I could listen to you recite and/or sing all day long! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 5,308 Points Patricia Grantham (10/31/2013 8:25:00 AM)

    Loved your birthday wishes. Reading these birthday wishes is like music to
    the ears. Too bad I can't hear you sing it aloud. That's what you call wishing
    someone all the best. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,384 Points Valsa George (10/30/2013 1:55:00 AM)

    A beautiful Birthday song worthy of sending to people, celebrating their Birthdays as a Birthday wish! Great write, Amitava! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 14, 2015


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