Happy And Sad Journey Of The River Poem by ritty patnaik

Happy And Sad Journey Of The River

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calm was the river,
meandering with serenity,
adorned with grace of lapping
on its own inbankment.
crossing, rocky catchments,
and elsewhere a sand bed
rising, and falling, in rhythmic
tune, barely audible,
yet to the boatman, with oars,
a feeling of harmony and joy.
singing to the tune of
flowing water, the lost tune
of yesterday!

also the creatures of water,
had seen endless joy filled days,
when the sun shined on water,
and they frolicked in glee,
the shining bodies of fish,
catching the sun,
appearing and dissapearing.
sun being, the sole monarch,
and soul of all waterbeings,
giving it new life energy to live.
stepping down as mentor to all
living souls.

it is a different story now,
today the underwater creatures,
are in the danger of extinction,
they lost their zeal,
in polluted water,
to survive and procreate.

now, the stars, and the birds
dont see their image,
in the murky, muddy water mirror.
the river decides to change its course,
or submerge itself in its on sorrow!

yet, in its angst mood in monsoon,
in unexplained ravage,
the river water, crosses,
all embankments,
making land, houses and trees, one
by flowing in fitful frenzied speed
in wrath and anger,
to meet its mentor
.......the sea.

torrential rain,
driving people,
out of home and hearth
of homestead land,
devouring, all. in all.
roaring in demonic cry
submerging, only from
tree tops, you could see all.

here there and everywhere,
floods has become,
a forceful energy, making
man and nature,
one in creation.
the suffering is endless,
the fight for survival continues.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raj Nandy 18 October 2009

Your poem meanders and flows beautifully, like the river in true serenity! 10! And between the banks of the Tigris and the Euphrates the oldest human civilization flourished in Mesopotapia, followed by the banks of the Nile and the Indus! -Raj

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Ejaz Khan 07 October 2009

It's hardly a moment when the world and things in it don't change, we all go through the process of metamorphosis and the rivers aren't any exception. Let the winds of change settle down, the harmonic days will return. A wonderful write, underlining the disturbed balancesand in nature and its consequences!

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Indira Babbellapati 07 October 2009

it's makes a wonderful read...only wished it's shorter!

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