Happiness Poem by Garfield Grimmett

Happiness

Rating: 4.9


Happiness is state of the mind not a feel
many people believe happiness is not real
people say you can reach it but you have to work for it
i believe happiness is here but you just dont know it
happiness cant be bought touched or owned
happiness is a rare commodity that can take a life time to realize
people can recieve happiness through another ones eyes
its a state of peaceful bliss its a high that most people miss
i cant see it nor salvage it, i dont think it will come to me in an instance
but at least i can see hapiness in the distance

copyright 2008 Garfield Grimmett

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 28 January 2009

That is what many, many many, seek in this life.[ Funny, but most people created there own hells ]

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C.R. Clark 28 January 2009

What greater gift could anyone ask of life than happiness? Without it, what would anything else mean? Great write my friend. Best wishes Richard

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Absent Wryta 29 January 2009

Great poem. An underlying little bit of sadness. Its nicely written flows beautifully. I love the ending. Full of hope.

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Vernon Eaker 29 January 2009

A wonderful example of writing, fine descriptive piece.

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Lisa French 28 January 2009

This is really good! I like how it's showing how you see happiness compared to others in a way. Excellent work! ! 10

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Jessica Robert 21 August 2009

Wonderful, I adore the waay you describe happiness (: It's incredible. H&K's - j e s s i c a ♥

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Smiley Hooker 19 August 2009

i love the spirit of this write...very positive! thanks for sharing happy moments with us :)

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*Innocent Angel* 29 January 2009

Happiness is what this poem shows and I can tell happiness is how you felt when you wrote it

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happiness is the feel you get after reading good poetry.. this made me happy

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Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 29 January 2009

very descriptive. yeah, very truthful words with possitive thinking.Convey a vauable message to the reader.

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