Hanging There Poem by Heather Burns

Hanging There

Rating: 5.0


Hanging there
suspended in time

waiting

attached to a golden
thread

Its' beginning to stretch
getting taut

snap!

it breaks release

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 22 August 2013

Wow. Wonderful poem Heather.. Short and Sweet. Loved it.. Thank you for the lovely comments for my poems Heather...Thanks a lot.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 22 August 2013

stretch, taut, snap....final release! brilliant brevity, Heather.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 22 August 2013

That break is a release. It is not pleasant to be in stretched taut state for long. Thank you for a beautiful poem with economy of words.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 22 August 2013

Wow a fantastic poem so unique n d golden thread enhances its poetic effect. Thanx 4 yor reviews too. Take care heather :)

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