Hand Of Hope Poem by Lyn Paul

Hand Of Hope

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What you have brought to my life I cannot explain
Meeting you all has been an incredible gain
There have been tears of laughter and sadness too
I'm watching the waves crash and thinking of you
We shared, we explored we all gave our heart
Preparing us all for this new start
This start, this change that will help us grow
A positive step for a new tomorrow
I'm looking at the footsteps in the sand
On my shoulder I can feel that hand
That hand of hope that was given to me
That hand that brought us together that made us all see
See the simplest thing can cause stress and pain
Yet we can bring sunshine it doesn't have to be rain
So with our hand of hope let us give support
To those in need - to those that fought





Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL

Hand Of Hope
Saturday, February 22, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: believe,hope,pain,suicide
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In this world we can all make a change. For change is so often needed.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A sweet song of hope that can change the world if we dare to live it! Well done my friend!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 24 February 2014

I agree Lyn and you say it so beautifully!

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Geetha Jayakumar 24 February 2014

A Beautiful poem with great message. So with our hand of hope let us give support To those in need - to those that fought......... Very true said Lyn, A change is often needed. Beautifully you have presented it.

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Valerie Dohren 26 February 2014

We can all make a change to this world if we do or think for the benefit of others. Well penned Lyn, and a great sentiment.

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Valsa George 27 February 2014

We are all catalysts of change! If we can bring about a positive change, we can feel proud that we have achieved something remarkable... As ever your poem carries a great message! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2021

On my shoulder I can feel that hand That hand of hope that was given to me That hand that brought us together that made us all see.....magnificent!

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Louis Rams 04 April 2014

and with that hand of hope your heart will begin to rise untill that moment that you see a brand new sky.

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Yash Shinde 03 April 2014

.......all your poems fill reader with a positive vibe..............this quality of your is unmatchable....lovely piece again

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Amitava Sur 11 March 2014

A lovely penning with all hopes for self and all others.Let us stride with those hopes for a newer tomorrow.

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Louis Rams 03 March 2014

an excellent write and words so true

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