Hammer Friend, Hammer Loud Poem by Pranab K Chakraborty

Hammer Friend, Hammer Loud



building workers
hammering
with tremendous thrust
to dust the roof
of old construction

long time
unbearable sound
of repeated hammering
puzzled my nerves
but when I observed
the accurate task...
got excited

sometimes it needs
to be hammered
old values
old dogmas
even the old
institutions
holding the global observance
need to be smashed to form
the new constitution
to save the civilians
the nations
and obviously the earth
where we live the human

here hammering workers alone
but millions of millions
when get charge to hammer

just imagine
the dust
irresistible
to expose
a new dawn....

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Pranab k c
Edited on 03/07/2012
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Allemagne Roßmann 17 July 2012

Hammering sounds, hammer is static and not problematic.The nails the hammer pins in could be of alloyed metal for the civilisation to survive against Indias repetitive tender making people no avail but hammer, hammer again until life goes a misnomer.

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If but only we could master a way to hammer away the milleniums build-up of of evil that clings to society like earwigs to the coffin wood....Excellent penning, Pran...~FjR~

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