Halku (1) - New Variety Haiku Poem by Maria Barbara Korynt

Halku (1) - New Variety Haiku

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(1) only treasure
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is hanging loosely

the red slip on his treasure

right away will fall

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(HALKU - new variety haiku. Thursday,03 January 2008 14: 39 the new variety of the miniature under the name 'Halku' comes from - from the slip.) I invented it to play with the word and the association, using one topic - in this case - SLIPS. Holding the rigorous principle applying to construction in this play is an additional impediment - as similarly as in the haiku: 5.7,5. Since it is my idea - so I just determined principles. Maria Barbara Korynt

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dagmara Anna 06 May 2009

This type of the poetry resembles the haiku. Even though principles of writing are less rigorous, necessary elements are an impediment: the determined subject matter and the need to fit words in three lines (lines) and for structure 5.7,5. It is difficult, but as can be seen negotiable. I like him on account of the resulting advantage of this discipline. Such writing is teaching self-disciplines, thinkings, frugalities of the word. He lets then notice mistakes in other poems. A play on words is an additional positive element, with times the ambiguity and the element of the humour not to say sometimes of raciness. Very much I like HALKU, they are teaching me and they are entertaining. I recommend everyone as part of the exercise. I like it very much. Thank you :)) Dagmara Anna

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