sallam yassin

Freshman - 1,727 Points (05/06/1968 / Hargeisa, Somaliland)

Hajj


Hajj journey to the heaven

Oh god on my journey
To Hajj
Humble and with long
On my path
To your older House
The oldest of all houses
Loaded with my sins
And doubts
My hope is only
Your mercy
My lord
Show me the road
Where right
And where wrongs
On the path to your heaven

Submitted: Tuesday, October 01, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, October 02, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Hajj by sallam yassin )

  • Gold Star - 37,621 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/21/2014 6:58:00 AM)

    Labbaik Allahumma Labbaik May Allah bless you and fulfil your desire | (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Ibnu Din Assingkiri (10/7/2013 12:11:00 AM)

    ameen, ya robbal a'lamin. true...hajj is a journey to the heaven, it also symbolises the hardship of going there. the hajj ritual reflects sacrifices. in a week time, happy eidul-adha my bro in faith :) . (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 603 Points Shahzia Batool (10/2/2013 2:10:00 PM)

    more than a poem, it is a heart's longing...deeply spiritual...God bless you for writing this! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,665 Points Wahab Abdul (10/2/2013 12:56:00 PM)

    great poem on Hajj... in different tone and with unique perspective... love it (Report) Reply

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