Haikus Poem by MAR HOFF

Haikus



Emotion
You slipped through my hands
And left a large, empty space
where you used to be.

Emotion
The ocean's expanse
drags my body into depths
unable to see

Time of Day
The sun's tendrils will
moonlight behind a blanket
of security

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 09 June 2014

very good writing, I like it, thanks. please read my poems and comment.

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John Smith 13 June 2014

these haikus are deep man. In the first one, it seems as if the author wanted to hold onto something but instead let it go and it didnt come back. the second one is about an overwhelming feeling. The third one is about comfortablilty

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* Sunprincess * 20 June 2014

.............emotion as deep as the ocean....enjoyed..

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Samantha Blackman 13 June 2014

These are really abrupt yet deep at the same time

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Pooja Patel 13 June 2014

its really good nd im gonna miss you next year

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Pooja Patel 13 June 2014

its really great nd im gonna miss you so much next year

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Marla C 13 June 2014

this is very deep ;) beautiful imagery and word choice!

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