MAR HOFF


Haikus - Poem by MAR HOFF

Emotion
You slipped through my hands
And left a large, empty space
where you used to be.

Emotion
The ocean's expanse
drags my body into depths
unable to see

Time of Day
The sun's tendrils will
moonlight behind a blanket
of security

Form: haiku


Comments about Haikus by MAR HOFF

  • Gold Star - 16,206 Points * Sunprincess * (6/20/2014 7:28:00 PM)

    .............emotion as deep as the ocean....enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Samantha Blackman (6/13/2014 10:08:00 PM)

    These are really abrupt yet deep at the same time (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pooja Patel (6/13/2014 6:54:00 AM)

    its really good nd im gonna miss you next year (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Pooja Patel (6/13/2014 6:53:00 AM)

    its really great nd im gonna miss you so much next year (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Marla C (6/13/2014 6:51:00 AM)

    this is very deep ;)

    beautiful imagery and word choice! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Smith (6/13/2014 6:35:00 AM)

    these haikus are deep man. In the first one, it seems as if the author wanted to hold onto something but instead let it go and it didnt come back. the second one is about an overwhelming feeling. The third one is about comfortablilty (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 36,724 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/9/2014 6:49:00 AM)

    very good writing, I like it, thanks.
    please read my poems and comment. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 9, 2014



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