Haiku ' Votive' Poem by miken newman

Haiku ' Votive'

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Black shawled women

votive candles spluttering ~

snow flakes fluttering.

Friday, November 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: women
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 19 July 2020

The juxtaposition of black and white against the dim background light of a mere candle does evoke a deep sense of some primitive, core vow between the dark and light of life. Beautiful!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 14 November 2014

Haiku-nice offering to Lords yet the onomatopoetic use has made the haiku more influential very nice thank you

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