Diane Hine

Silver Star - 4,107 Points (25 July 1956)

Haiku: Ultimatum - Poem by Diane Hine

Warned to mend its ways
Smallpox refused to listen
So it had to go


Comments about Haiku: Ultimatum by Diane Hine

  • Silver Star - 3,188 Points Kevin Patrick (11/10/2013 11:08:00 PM)

    I don't know why but I find this slightly humorous, I cant say I want this divorce to have a reconciliation, let the lawyers have it. (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,014 Points Krishnakumar Chandrasekar Nair (11/5/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    And things worse than that have come
    To torment us as before.........

    Very short and very good haiku...I welcome you to my page for your esteemed comments (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points marvin brato (11/1/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    Small but brings big emphasis in terms of warning! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 445 Points Danny Draper (10/31/2013 5:47:00 PM)

    Save for military malevolence to retain that pinch of darkness in reserve. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, October 31, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 31, 2013


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