Ken e Hall

Rookie (Last Century / England-Now Australian Citizen)

Haiku...That Sinking Feeling Jealousy...Edit - Poem by Ken e Hall

Shipwrecks Filled with young
Lovers broken hearts always
Sank in Jealous Seas
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Comments about Haiku...That Sinking Feeling Jealousy...Edit by Ken e Hall

  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/28/2013 8:23:00 AM)

    Wow. Wonderful Haiku..Jealousy leaves no place for love... (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 799 Points Yasmeen Khan (8/11/2013 7:54:00 AM)

    Brief and metaphorical, jealousy like a sea rages raves to drown Love. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,664 Points Ramesh Rai (7/28/2013 3:15:00 AM)

    brilliant write sir full of wisdom
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (7/27/2013 8:51:00 PM)

    nice haiku Ken jealousy has no place with love. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/27/2013 8:44:00 AM)

    so much in such few words, excellent! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (7/23/2013 5:25:00 AM)

    Nice one Ken, I invite you to read my haiku's when you have time. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,634 Points Ken E Hall (7/18/2013 4:37:00 AM)

    & Lyda & (16/7/2013)
    This is so true to the jealous feeling. Oh dear I am human he ha he. Nice Haiku... :) Thanks for sharing! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,634 Points Ken E Hall (7/18/2013 3:44:00 AM)

    Lorraine Colon(7/17/2013 4: 28: 00 PM)
    So clever. I enjoyed this very much. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 18, 2013

Poem Edited: Saturday, August 17, 2013


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