Haiku 'shoe' Poem by miken newman

Haiku 'shoe'

Rating: 4.5


My untied shoe-lace

following reluctantly-

my sisters pigtail.

Thursday, November 13, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: girl
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilkins 13 November 2014

a good haiku a shoe lace and sisers pigtail interesting good writing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2014

Beautiful haiku poem with purposeful realization shared on the desk. Nice job.

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