Palas Kumar Ray

Rookie - 213 Points (India)

Haiku (Senryu) ~ Warmth - Poem by Palas Kumar Ray

Sun absent today-
coldest day of the season
campfires at roadsides







© Palas Kumar Ray.All rights reserved. 

Form: haiku


Comments about Haiku (Senryu) ~ Warmth by Palas Kumar Ray

  • Rookie - 11 Points Tim Kitchin (5/29/2014 5:52:00 AM)

    Like this! Simple. Evocative. Making it the coldest day 'places' the evocation beautifully. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, June 6, 2014


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