Haiku Reaching Out Poem by Jonathan ROBIN

Haiku Reaching Out



Winter trees etched black
splayed branches stretch to lost leaves
soon Spring's fetched back.

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(1 April 2005)
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Sonny Rainshine 22 October 2006

One of my favorite forms, haiku is. The addition of the fetched-etched rhyme makes this one very satisfying. I like the image of the tree stretching toward its fallen leaves as though it can't wait to get 'em back. Very good haiku.

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