Haiku (R.I.P) Poem by Kelvin Owusu

Haiku (R.I.P)

Rating: 5.0


Heaven calls to her
hell grabs him hung a neck noose
sorrows bloom teary

Fly from here to next
beyond a blissful dreamer
rain dropp butterfly

Cover in dark light blindness
Foresight judgement heaven cry

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this is a challenge set by Ms. Gwen
I based this Haiku on those who have been killed
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nader Baheri 05 October 2012

brilliant and facinating. we and the others who are the victim of such crimes, would praise this great piece of work. mucha gracias for sharing

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Ramesh Rai 05 October 2012

RIP. who ever be but it is a great dedication to other to who are the victim of such occurrence.

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Kelvin Owusu 01 October 2012

i wrote this haiku due to a rape and murder which occurred over a week ago, it was a dedication to other cases such as this.

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Stevie Taite 01 October 2012

One is heaven bound, the other is a butterfly in the rain! Both will cause tears to fall? A lot said in your Haiku. Interesting!

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