Diane Hine

Silver Star - 4,143 Points (25 July 1956)

Haiku On David Mclansky's 'smoking My Pipe At The Window' - Poem by Diane Hine

Silver scales billow
I smoke pike at the window
Birds nibble my perch

Comments about Haiku On David Mclansky's 'smoking My Pipe At The Window' by Diane Hine

  • Valerie Dohren Valerie Dohren (2/23/2014 4:10:00 PM)

    Haven't read David's poem, so this one will have to remain a mystery. (Report) Reply

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  • Dinesh Nair Dinesh Nair (2/23/2014 1:07:00 AM)

    The lungs begin to die
    A vulture sees from the sky
    And a priest gets into his car....

    Is`n`t it a right sequence Diane? (Report) Reply

  • Elias Uddin Elias Uddin (2/21/2014 8:42:00 AM)

    nice haiku.........................! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 21, 2014

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