Haiku: Nature & Life- 1 Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Haiku: Nature & Life- 1

Rating: 3.1


1. Age sleeps
Under blanket-
Temperature falling.

2. Layer of frost
Settles into
The tunnel of desire

3. A louse walks
Along hair-way
Difficult destination.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ahmad Shiddiqi 19 August 2008

gorgeous! keep writing! could you read my poems too? thank you.

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Mamta Agarwal 25 August 2008

insightful, lovely-the beauty of Haiku so much said and unsaid, leaving the reader to think.

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Shimon Weinroth 17 September 2008

very nice with much depth and feeling,

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Dagmara Anna 11 August 2009

Very good and interesting written.I like it.

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Indira Renganathan 05 July 2009

Haikus in general are sweet delicacies...you have done well dainty...especially the last funny one

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excellent pieces.......

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 23 October 2008

Please add 'to' before Difficult destination. Imagination and metaphar marvelous mark 10

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Kesav Easwaran 25 September 2008

good haiku bunch...fragrant...especially the third one...10

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