Haiku - Morality Poem by David Beckham

Haiku - Morality

Rating: 4.7


Our morality
Erodes like the shorelines
When in wickedness we live

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anshul Gupta 19 August 2011

I don't know if it fits in the mold of a haiku, but I liked it very much...

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Lekë Loshi 14 August 2010

A well thought out haiku. Good job!

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Jenny Gordon 14 August 2010

Thanks. Bittersweet, short and to the point. I like it very well.

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Kevin Carney 13 August 2010

Not big on Haiku but very well written.I like the way you write again.

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Lynn Glover 13 August 2010

Very short but beautifully said. Nice Haiku and a good write. Lynn

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