Haiku. Molestation.(5-7-5) Poem by Valsa George

you take haiku to a higher level so well described the next time I see a bud I will remember this write of yours Thanks Valsa-10

If the bud wants to become a source of honey she will have to tolerate this molestation like a moon moon that looks more beautiful when clouds molest her.

Writing haikus in full stride. Wellworth the extra effort. Congratulations

Very vivid image comes to mind when reading this poem. Seems to have two meanings, one of pure nature and the other of man which is not pure. Great Haiku! 10+++++ Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

Oh this is fantastic write......Valsa.......imagination at the best.....amazing piece

Brilliant haiku.Thank u.anjandev roy.

A bud opens at night Like the moon on a clear sky Bees come to molest her.. very beautiful

An amazing Haiku! Appreciated the concept of molestation that you have deeply observed at the illicit deeds of an insect! Your poems are indeed very scholarly! I derive a lot of pleasure reading your poems! (10)

Like moon bud opens and bees come to molest her. Beautiful haiku on nature nicely presented. Thanks.

the only girl in town? ? ? great haiku! ! thanks Valsa-10