Haiku - Mickey Mouse Paperweight Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Haiku - Mickey Mouse Paperweight

Rating: 2.8


sitting over
a billion dollar project
a mickey mouse paperweight

colourless day
children dawdle birds
over the white sky

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 August 2006

John...You are quite the Craftsman grandeur in both Traditional & Contemporary Haiku Penning....I enjoy your style very much.I've dabbled a bit w/' KU myself, but it is most definitely not my strong-suit...Excellent job here''''''''''''''''''''''''''fjr

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Raynette Eitel 23 August 2006

I like the irony and contrasts in this, John It is excellent! Raynette

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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