Haiku Like Poem-4 Poem by subodh pandey

Haiku Like Poem-4

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Half filled pitcher
on a slant of a hill
stills a flying bird.

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Wabi Sabi 26 January 2012

that has made me feel relaxed, especially, Stills a flying bird

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Allemagne Roßmann 18 September 2011

Very good imagination here..well done

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Michael Oliver 17 September 2011

This is life.A new life.In thirteen words.Infinity captured in a finite space Masterful.

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