Haiku La La Poem by Aftab Alam

Haiku La La

Rating: 4.3


1
We desire
Daily a new sunny morn
Sun lights this darken world-forlorn

2
Pun fights with me with a horn
To this world I born
Me sapphire

3
Look, ye hook
Don't like itch you leech
Out, I will not click but kick

4
A riddle
Yes, easily that swells
Heart is a hut where love dwells

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 23 September 2020

Sun lights this darken world-forlorn- - - - - - - - - - - - like the way you put this, the adjective after the noun increased its effect

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Unwritten Soul 16 February 2012

each one create la and reach the last one i can sing la la la la...a nice compilation, that why i can sing lalalala hahahha...different flavors in one dishes..that's nice! _Unwritten Soul

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