Haiku Ii-The Queen Of The Lake Poem by the poet
Haiku Ii-The Queen Of The Lake
On the icy waters,
A symbol of elegance,
As it floats with grace.
Spreading its petals,
Iron hard yet so gentle,
Like a shining star.
As the Queen settles,
Under the moonlight shadow,
The hymn starts to sing.
This still of the night,
The lotus rests on her throne,
Such timeless beauty.
wow, I also trying to write haiku, but I don't have, this good poems
Alex - You have a gift for expressing so much in so few words. I hope to read many more of these beautiful haiku in the future! Best to you - Cheryl
This is a good haiku. Keep writing the best. This is yet another wonderful poem. I need a medal for having the most best poems over here! Lol! God Bless All Poets. *Lilly*
this is a good haiku my only concern is the emphasis of iron in the title. Though 'Iron Hard' is mentioned in the poem, i dont feel like iron is significant to the poem as a whole. Nothing wrong with the poem, i just suggest a reworking of the tittle
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/17/2024 8:29:42 PM # 1.0.0.1119
maybe you could change it to `On icy waters..' to make the count completely consistent in perfect 'ku form thru-out... Alex. well tasted, well laid-out, deserving description.. care, sjg