Haiku ~ Haiku ~haiku Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku ~ Haiku ~haiku

Rating: 5.0


desolate mountains
those tiny flowers, in breeze
hanging on the cliff

unfruitful desert
wandering for the water
these thirsty creatures

semi-dried river
under the cerulean sky
an abandoned boat

Haiku ~ Haiku ~haiku
Wednesday, October 6, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,nature,truth
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tihama Hykam 06 October 2021

Hugely impressed. Art of haiku is rare.

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Michael Jack 06 October 2021

Hope in distress is clearly evident. Amusing Haikus.

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Gordon Walter 08 October 2021

Triple feast of Haikus.

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Mamta S 08 October 2021

Fantastic haiku series, Asimji.

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Varsha M 08 October 2021

Yes when calamity comes or we meet a catastrophe life pulls off all its colors. But i feel time really changes hang on.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 07 October 2021

Three fascinating Haiku - mountains, desert, river & a boat! .......Always Top score for you dear Poet Asim

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Gordon Walter 07 October 2021

Awesome poem.

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