Haiku Good Friday Poem by Eddie Roa

Haiku Good Friday

Rating: 5.0


Suntanned revelers
Frolic in raucous delight
Jesus impaled sweats

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

I imagine them suntanned with their heads in the sand. You bring the contrast of fun and loud indifference to a holy prophet's torture. Karin Anderson

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Abraham De La Torrre 24 February 2009

Your haiku deserves my senryu: Wet as sweat can be rode the treadmill calorie soaking up the free. if it does not measure up to your humbling homage to Him.

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Lynda Robson 23 February 2009

A good haiku showing the contrast at Easter, 10 from me Lyndaxx

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Sandra Fowler 20 February 2009

The contrast is tragic. A world unaware. Food for thought. As always, Sandra

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Catrina Heart 20 February 2009

a nice haiku written in a jaxtaposition of verses...10+++

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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