Haiku For Mf Poem by Michael Shepherd

Haiku For Mf

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What a lovely present!

I threw last year's away...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
kenneth william snow 05 April 2005

Regifting Michael...It's all the rage

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Solitary Man 05 April 2005

Michael, you really should know better/ but I, for one, /remain glad that you choose not to// Jodi and I are pen-pals, you see/ and you may mistake friendly exchange/ with pedantry// Jodi is one of the best/ young poets I've read/ and wait 'til you see/some of the wonderful things/ she hasn't posted yet.

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Colleen Courtney 29 April 2014

Hmmm....don't know what to make of this one....

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Michael Shepherd 05 April 2005

Hey Mark - as if! And the not-quite haiku's a pun on the 'now' (present) of your own poem. See! I'm inspired by your example! Best, Michael

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Solitary Man 05 April 2005

sorry guys, I didn't know I was arguing with anybody! I think there are crossed wires somewhere. All the best, Mark.

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Jodi Right 05 April 2005

please don't argue on my account, both of you are great to me an are both friends i know that i am a beginner and have alot to learn so i really don't mind criticism from both of you no matter how harsh it may be Thank you for being both great friends Love Jodixxx

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Michael Shepherd 05 April 2005

Mark, who's arguing with who about what? Jodi and I are pen-pals too...

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