Haiku - Dawn Poem by Don Haney

Haiku - Dawn

Rating: 2.8


as dawn approaches
the dark sky turns pink then blue
this day God has made

~~Revised~~
~~Better Written~~

dawn approaches
sky turns pink and blue-
I awake

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 29 April 2014

The hope of a newly dawning day! Nice write!

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Captain Herbert Poetry 27 April 2014

simple expression of thoughts.Nice write

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