Haiku Collection Ii Poem by Sathya Narayana

Haiku Collection Ii

Rating: 5.0


Soaked moon
In lake waters
Melted by dawn

Moon then clouds
Moon then clouds moon then clouds
Monsoon’s hide and seek

first a thud at night
then roiling sounds of waters
Found moon in our well

Spring garden
Albino chameleon
Sans action

Hill in drizzle
Like a dark beauty
In see-through nighty

Sun through new green leaves
On night formed puddles
Flash, flash, flash

Rain doctor helps
Pregnant earth deliver
Baby saplings

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Babbellapati 15 August 2009

hill, earth, rain, moon, clouds, leaf...your haikus brought them all to my back yard!

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Seema Aarella 16 August 2009

Spell binding images of nature.....highly exotic and beautiful haiku's! ! ! !

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Varanasi Ramabrahmam 18 August 2009

Nice collection of poems about nature. Liked them much

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Ben Gieske 23 August 2009

I also like to take my haiku and put them together to weave a theme. I like this one above the rest: Soaked moon In lake waters Melted by dawn

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Seema Chowdhury 23 August 2009

nice collection of Haiku.

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Reshma Ramesh 28 August 2009

bravo superb writes.................and thanks for the compliments

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Miriam Maia Padua 27 August 2009

very marvelous collection of haiku... words flows with depth... really great.. words pictured out a wonderful and vivid pictures... I love this as always... 10+++ Lovelots, Maia

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Vinod Ak 26 August 2009

'Rain Doctor Helps.....' is a marvellous imagination and expression! Awesome! ! !

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Vinod Ak 26 August 2009

Splendid and inspiring Haiku collection!

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Catrina Heart 25 August 2009

I'm spell bound with your haiku collection my friend............fabulous! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10/10

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Sathya Narayana

Sathya Narayana

Nellore, Andhra Pradesh
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